所谓*这个概念,如果大家都去这么用的话,就等于没有用了。PartB 部分是有的,但是 partA 没有,PartB 可以基本上把这个文章全写完的一个模板 方式。*模板,你这么想,大家告诉我,只要一个题目能够转变成一社会现象 之后,*好准备两到三套大的**模式。
关于*模式的几个问题:
一、我们选用的句子的灵活性强,经过了精心的选择
二、句型都是五星级,并在开头和长短句子方面有设计,并注意语法的丰富, 每句话语法都不同.
三、我们选的句子与市面的任何资料都不同
四、很多同学说写的一样是否是雷同,不大可能,因为很难分到一个考场 批判危害性的框架
1.总共写十七个句子.
*段四个句子,*句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画*强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型 谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词批判这个 现象是强烈的指责。
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, ,(3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity. (4)This phenomenon of 主题 should be condemned severely or made illegal. (5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害,并举例论证,预测危害的趋势
第二段七个句子,首先*句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危 害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象的*个危害,用 "not only, but also"的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性, 第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个 豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四 个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句子谈一个代替 "for example"的十五个 单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体 的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定 会对个人在精神和生活上有危害.*后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石 级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现, 甚至是毁灭性的后果。
(1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主题 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than 主题 to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主题 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced 主题 will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.
*后一段要强调解决问题,谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识,加强执法
第三段六个句子, *个句子是下个结论,谈解决问题的必要性.第二个句 子是*个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象,第三个句子谈提高人们的觉悟关 于着这个现象能提高人们对这个现象的觉悟.第四个句子谈个谚语,谈一下实践我 的建议的重要性.五个句子谈解决的任重道远.第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好 的未来。
(1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent 主题. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of savingsomebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
2.积极有利型的文章 文章以团队精神为例子
*段谈的是三个句子,*,二个句子都是在描述图画,第三句子这个现 象对社会发展的积极的现象,第四个句子是图画简单,寓意深刻.
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).(2) The most striking feature is(图画重点信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
第二个段子,*个句子谈一个十二个单词的爆发力的主题句,第二个句子谈这个现象的永恒的社会含义,用一个三十五个单词的钻石级的排比句子,谈只要有这个现象就可以让我们不断有意义的事情,征服挑战和竞争,并*后走向成功.第三个可以从反面谈如果没有这个积极现象,人们生活就忧闷,有挫折感,无前进动力,前途渺茫.第四个句子谈有两个大的好处.第五个句子谈*个好处,通常是让生活丰富,有效率.再谈第二个好处通常是谈一些个人发展或社会进步的好处.第五个句子是代替for example的五星级的句子.第六个是具体的举例子,谈根据一项调查表明,80%的人只要利用这个积极的现象就容易改变人生,提高素质.也可以单独举个性例子,第七个句子是倒装句子谈只有这个现象才能让我们成为社会的成功者.
第三个段子首句 谈二十五个单词的超豪华的句子,谈无论做大事还是小 事,无论做难事还是容易事,都要这个积极现象.第二个句子谈有两点建议让它变 的更好.第三个句子谈让它变的更好的*个方法,通常发挥它的好处,避免坏处. 第四个句子谈第二个方法,第五个句子谈个谚语,第六个谈解决任务的任重道远. 第七个倒装句谈只要有这个积极现象就会享受一个美好,丰富和有活力的未来.
(1)From what have been discussed above it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
