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sat小知识:
类别一必备素材一:从失败到成功的故事
典型例题
Can something unsuccessful turn into something good?
例子重点:失败的细节-略加过渡-成功的细节学生范文
Point: Very true is the saying that failure can teach us a lot.
Illustration: Last year, I participated in the election of the president for the student union.
Although I thought I had performed confidently, convincingly and calmly, I did not acquire the position.
(营造失败)Later,I realized that I merely concentrated on the personal manner, emotional expressions,eye contact with listeners and other intangible elements while I did not propose concrete and practicalideas to operate the student union effectively.(营造过渡)After recognizing my deficiency, I felt that Ibecame more intelligent and mature despite the unsuccessful experience.(营造成功)Explanation: Consequently, it is the good thing of meaningful and valuable enlightenment that arises from unsuccessful things
范文点评:本文语言精练,基本结构清晰,但是这个素材非常缺乏细节。硬伤是成功这个点的营造。他写道:“我觉得我变得更聪明,更成熟。”但是实际情况是,这样的阐述算不上成功的细节,因为这只是作者内心的想法,并不是事实。
基本评分:8-9分
引申话题
Is memory a help or a hindrance in helping us learn from the past and succeed in the future?
这是官方样题里的一个话题,因为配有满分范文。所以拿出来让考生借鉴一下。
题目翻译:在大家认识过去和获得成功的过程中,记忆是帮助还是阻碍?
题目分析归类:某些考生可能已经发现.其实这个题目本质上就是从失败到成功的故事。因为记忆可以营造成一段失败的经历--从中学到了经验-进而成功。
例子重点:memory--失败的经历--learn from the past从过去中学到了经验--help帮助自己一succeed in the future后成功
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