SAT写作时间为25分钟，要求就作文命题中的一对对立论点阐述自己的观点，无字数限制。佛山英语培训为大家整理了一篇SAT写作范文，这篇获得高分的SAT写作考试范文的主要是关于采水果的，大家可以在备考自己的SAT写作考试的时候根据自己的实际情况，进行适当的准备和借鉴，以下就是关于采水果的SAT作文范文。 　　Dad had always told me about his experiences as a youth picking fruits fruit in villages, and I listened with envy. I thought that it would be glorious to climb on up a tree and, with my own hands, pluck the fruits fruit that could be eaten by humans.   　　My chance finally came. In the plum-ripening season, our South Korean neighbor invited a few families to her backyard to pick plums. I was overjoyed at this news. The South Korean neighbor's house was very close to ours, on the side of the road near where I'd pass to retrieve mail every day. The week before I had seen some ripe plums lying on the ground and thought to myself: what a waste. The South Koreans there ran a very successful restaurant, busy the entire day, and had not the time to pick the fruit. But this opportunity was great; not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!   　　Dads brought ladders from home; the other children and I ran out front; moms brought plastic bags and smiles, trailing behind us. We opened the fence door to our neighbor's backyard and look! Deep purple plums the size of small tennis balls were scattered everywhere, on the grass, laying in the dirt, hanging in trees. I picked first the ones that were most royal in color, then those that were ripe and soft, pinching them lightly with my fingers. We ignored the very light or pink plums, or those that were hard to the touch. Initially, I had found a perfectly ripe plum: instead of putting it in the bag, I scratched off a small peel and sucked sweet plum juice down my throat. I hurriedly put the rest of it into my mouth, spitting the seed into the grass. I found out that the seed and skin of plums were sour, and avoided further of such kinds. All about me other people began eating plums too.   　　The moms finally arrived with the bags, and with everyone's help, we quickly furnished six or seven bags. On each tree we left a few unripe plums to wait for our South Korean neighbor. 　　In the end the parents instructed us to throw overripe fruits in the trashcan and to wash our hands with the hose. Before leaving, we gave a large bag of plums to our dear South Korean neighbor, thanking them for their generosity.   　　At home, Dad tried to use this opportunity to teach me Chinese. He said that I couldn't just eat the plum, but should learn a bit about it.  “There's a Chinese saying that goes, 'Even though plums and peaches can't talk, there is still a beaten path below them, 'which means that despite not selling themselves, these fruits still attract many people to their location. We should be like these fruits fruit. ”   　　I picked up a fresh plum and chewed on it.“That makes sense, but, especially in America, doesn't direct advertising work as well? ”   　　Dad stared at me. “Yeah, I suppose you're right too. ”   　　以上就是关于采水果的SAT作文范文，佛山英语培训邀您一起来看看关于本篇文章考官的评价吧。     　　Comments：Great experience! ? In the fourth paragraph a different phrase should be used instead of “…we quickly furnished…”。 As written it makes no sense. Use a different phrase to mean that the bags were full. The word “fruit” can be either singular or plural, but, in this passage the “s” is not needed.   　　评语：很好的经历！在第四自然段中，“…we quickly furnished…”的说法应该被替换，因为作为书面表达形式它讲不通。应使用另外一种说法来表达袋子已经满了的意思，单词fruit既可用作单数，也可用作复数，但是在这一篇文章中，没必要使用复数形式。   　　佛山英语培训也为大家准备了关于采水果的SAT作文范文的翻译，帮助大家更好的理解吸收，希望大家取长补短，更轻松的攻克SAT写作。   　　爸爸总是告诉我他年少时在村庄里摘水果的经历，我听着很羡慕。我想，爬上一棵树，用自己的双手摘下可供人们食用的果子，那会是非常风光的事情。   　　我的机会终于来了。在李子成熟的季节，我们的韩国邻居邀请了几家人到她家的后院里去摘李子。听到这个消息，我欢呼雀跃起来。韩国邻居的房子离我家很近，坐落在大路边，我每天都要经过那儿去取信。一周之前我便看见一些成熟的李子掉在地上，当时我想，这多可惜呀。住在那里的韩国人经营着一家餐馆，生意很红火，他们从早忙到晚，没有时间去摘果子。然而这个机会太好了：我不仅能够体验采摘果子，而且还可以享受它的甜蜜味道。   　　爸爸们从家里取来梯子；我和其他小孩跑在前面；妈妈们拿着塑料袋，满面笑容地跟在我们后面。我们打开邻居家后院的栅栏门，看！像小网球一样大小的深紫色李子分散在各处-在草坪上，在泥土地上，挂在树上。我首先摘下了那些颜色紫的李子，然后用手指轻轻地捏着摘下那些成熟的、软软的李子。对那些颜色很浅的或者粉红色的李子，或者摸上去硬硬的李子我们都不予理会。   　　开始的时候，我发现了一只熟透了的李子，我没把它放进袋子里，而是撕掉一小块皮，然后将甜甜的李子汁吸吮进我的喉咙里。我匆忙将剩下的部分放进嘴里，将李子核吐在草丛里。我发现李子的核和皮是酸的，所以后来吃的时候就避开了这些部分。我周围的其他人也开始吃起李子来了。   　　妈妈们带着袋子终于赶到了。于是，在大家的帮助下，我们很快就装满了六七个袋子。在每一棵树上我们都留下了一些尚未成熟的李子，等着我们的韩国邻居以后去摘。   　　后，父母们指导我们将熟过了的水果扔进垃圾箱，然后用水龙头洗手。在离开之前，我们把一大袋李子给了我们亲爱的韩国邻居，以感谢他们的慷慨。   　　回到家里，爸爸试图利用这个机会教我中文。他说我不能只是吃李子，还应该学习一点与李子有关的知识。“有一句*俗语：‘桃李不言，下自成蹊’，它的意思是说尽管这些水果不会推销自己，但依然吸引了许多人。我们应该像这些水果一样。”   　　我拿起一颗新鲜的李子，咀嚼起来：“这话说得有道理。不过，尤其是在美国这样的*里，难道直接做广告不也挺有效吗？”   　　爸爸盯着我说：“嗯，我想你也是对的。” 　　以上就是关于采水果的SAT作文范文的翻译，佛山英语培训小编提醒您SAT写作考试的时间短，但是要求却很严，大家在备考SAT写作考试的时候，大家可以根据自己的实际情况，对范文的语言应用和例子的选择进行不同程度的准备，以便丰富自己的备考内容，对考试有更加全面的应对。