2023年11月5日考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1:三年间5种杂志的销量百分比范文,供雅思考生参考。 点击查看》》》11月5日雅思写作task1回忆:16-25男生看电视和参加体育运动比例。
【图形分类】
柱状图
【题目解析】
根据图中信息,可以如下布局:
开头段:转述题目;
综述段:归纳不同杂志类型的占比特征;
主体段1:介绍显著上升的数据类型;
主体段2:介绍显著下降的数据类型。
主体段3:介绍变化有限的数据类型。
【写作思路】
开头段:该图表介绍在十年间,不同类型杂志在英国读者中的受欢迎程度。
综述段:总的来说,各类杂志的销售水平基本相当,但音乐除外。在整个调查期间,音乐始终排在*后。
主体段1:*畅销的是以经济题材杂志,在头五年中占了四分之一的市场份额。随后又攀升了10%,在2009年登上榜首。电影杂志的增长甚至更为可观,因为它们在头五年里销量(5%)增加了四倍,然后在2009年又再添5%。
主体段2:与这种上升势头形成对的,是社会议题类杂志的迅速下降。尽管这类杂志在早期发行量*大(40%),但十年后的销售量骤降至5%,使该类杂志成为*不受欢迎类别。
主体段3:其余两类杂志的读者【天津雅思培训】 群变化要小得多。尽管体育类杂志在2005年曾有短暂的5%增长,但销售额停留在20%左右。音乐是*不受关注的主题,杂志销量也比较稳定(10%),尽管2005年曾下降到5%。
【参考范文】
The chart provides information about how popular different types of magazines were among British readers over a decade.
In general, sales figures were largely comparable across genres exception music, which remained last in rank over the entire period surveyed.
The bestsellers were economics-themed, with a market share of a quarter 【天津雅思培训】 over the first five years. This was followed by a 10% rise, resulting in the top rank for this genre in 2009. Even more substantial growth was recorded for film-related magazines because they generated five times the original level of sales (5%) in the first five years before securing a further 5% in 2009.
Such upward momentum can be contrasted with the rapid decline of magazines on social issues. Although this was the by far the most widely distributed category early on (40%), their sales plummeted to a mere 5% by the end of the decade, rendering the genre the least sought-after.
There was much less change to the reader base of the remaining two categories. Around 20% of sales was attributable to sports despite a brief 5% increase in 2005. Similar stability was recorded for music, the least popular topic (10%), although there was 【天津雅思培训】a drop to 5% in 2005.
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【语言积累】
1.sales figures 销售额
2.the bestsellers *畅销的商品/类型
3.market share 市场份额
4.top rank 排名*
5.generated five times the original level of sales 产生原本销量的五倍
6.upward momentum 增长势头
7.be contrasted with 与……形成对比
8.plummet 大幅下降
9.the least sought-after *不受欢迎
10.reader base 读者群体
